I have a draft of my research paper done. All i need is to have it more argumentative on child abuse and less summarizing the articles.

Here is the link to my research paper:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pn8TcKBXMfunPGAqJSpXztivYZ5HOpIPqfh5PqD-nRI/edit?usp=sharing

Here is the link to the sources:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pn8TcKBXMfunPGAqJSpXztivYZ5HOpIPqfh5PqD-nRI/edit?usp=sharing

Child abuse